Monday, January 26, 2009

"hey friend - you got a light?" (a re-worked poem)

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . "lighthouse at night (light on)"


. . . . .. . . . . . . . . "lighthouse at night (light off)"



"hey friend, you got a light?"


the love i feel from you now is that of a sister

or a neighbor. i gaze at your hands expecting to see
a revolver or cookies.

you have the look of a soldier returning from
a 6 year tour of duty. a lighthouse keeper

about to see sun.


and with a condescending
nod
toward my unconditional love

(of mixed metaphors & bad puns)

you have the look of a seamstress
who has jumped ship in midseam.

i walk away with a bitter taste
that i
selfishly season to suit my palate:

a dash of spite,

a pinch of anger,
and for good measure -
a smidgen of rhetorical flair.

nothing is expected now.
you have flipped everything off.

you have hit the last light.

from your side
a dead bolt slides
and from mine
this final line.



(from the chapbook TRYING TO UNRAVEL SOMETHING, ANYTHING, 1997 - originally titled "the gate is sealed," re-worked in 2009 as "hey friend - you got a light?")

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1 comment:

marley said...

ahhh . . . did him get him's feelings hurt by another BAD, BAD woman?

here's an idea buddy: go to eBay and bid on some balls.

and also - why don't you get off your lazy ass for a change poet-boy and actually write a *new* poem about your latest "pain" instead of this recycled crap from 1997 that sucked then and will always suck no matter how many times that you "re-work" it.

just a thought.


(douche bag)